What are the Pros and Cons of being rich?
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Elon Musk said, \"If an engineer isn\'t rich, they have to take orders from a rich person.\" I am an engineer, so it touched me. I totally agreed it. The rich person can buy time for themselves. The Cons occurred by people around me. It means, if I am a rich person, many people want to borrow money or ask money. They try to count on me. If I refues it, they will disconnect or blame me. So, I want to be a rich person in secret.
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- Teacher Angela
Elon Musk said, \"If an engineer isn\'t rich, they have to take orders from a rich person.\"
>> CORRECT
I am an engineer, so it touched me. I totally agreed it.
>> I am an engineer, so it touched me. I totally agreed with it.
The rich person can buy time for themselves.
>> The wealthy can buy time for themselves.
The Cons occurred by people around me.
>> The cons were caused by people around me
It means, if I am a rich person, many people want to borrow money or ask money.
>> If I am a rich person, many people want to borrow money or ask for money.
They try to count on me. If I refues it, they will disconnect or blame me.
>> They try to count on me. If I refuse, they may disconnect or blame me.
So, I want to be a rich person in secret.
>> So, I want to become rich secretly.
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