What are the pros and cons of international marriage?
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Well, I think if I get international marriage, I will just feel pleasure to find my wife in my life. There is a no special reason. It\'s the pros that I can get marriage. On the other hand, I guess there are lots of the cons. The first cons is a different culture. Even though I love someone with the different culture, I couldn\'t understand something such as a habit, religion, and environment. Second, it\'s the parents. Some parents tend to think that you should meet the same nationality. Korean should meet the Korean, Japanese should meet the Japanese even if they don\'t respect their children. By the way, I think this is my last homework because after a class today, I couldn\'t post the homework. I really appreciate to you. You\'ve been making me funny for a couple of months. Of course, we can keep in touch with it. And, when I have a good news about the frog princess, I have to send a message to you first. 그동안 고마웠어
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Well, I think if I get international marriage, I will just feel pleasure to find my wife in my life.
>> Well, I think if I get international marriage, I will just feel pleasure to find my future wife.
There is no special reason.
>> CORRECT!It\'s the pros that I can get marriage.
>> CORRECT!On the other hand, I guess there are lots of the cons.
>> CORRECT!The first cons is a different culture.
>> The first cons is the cultural difference.
Even though I love someone with the different culture, I couldn\'t understand something such as a habit, religion, and environment.
>> CORRECT!Second, it\'s the parents.
>> CORRECT!Some parents tend to think that you should meet the same nationality.
>> CORRECT!Korean should meet the Korean, Japanese should meet the Japanese even if they don\'t respect their children.
>> CORRECT!
By the way, I think this is my last homework because after a class today, I couldn\'t post the homework. I really appreciate to you. You\'ve been making me funny for a couple of months. Of course, we can keep in touch with it. And, when I have a good news about the frog princess, I have to send a message to you first. 그동안 고마웠어
[Let\'s keep in touch! If I have more stories to tell you, I\'ll just send you a message on Instagram/Kakaotalk ~ but I think Kakaotalk is much better HAHAHAHA!]
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