What are the pros and cons of keeping a pet?
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If I have a pet, the pet will be a good friend and I can live with it without lonesome. But, raising a pet is not easy. I need to have a responsibility and take care of it like a human.
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If I have a pet, the pet will be a good friend and I can live with it without lonesome.
>> If I have a pet, the pet will be a good friend and I can live with it without being lonesome.
But, raising a pet is not easy.
>> Correct
I need to have a responsibility and take care of it like a human.
>> I need to be responsible and take care of it like a human.
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