What are the pros and cons of living in an apartment?
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Actually I don\'t want to live in an apartment. It\'s because its location that my apartment is hard to find. Also, I don\'t want to live with other people because sometimes, we get trouble with them about some problems and awkward to speak when we meet or say hello.
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Hi, Daisy. Thank you so much for doing your homework. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
Actually I don\'t want to live in an apartment.
>> Actually, I don\'t want to live in an apartment.
It\'s because its location that my apartment is hard to find.
>> Correct
Also, I don\'t want to live with other people because sometimes, we get trouble with them about some problems and awkward to speak when we meet or say hello.
>> I don\'t want to live with other people because we sometimes encounter problems and it can be awkward to communicate or greet them.
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