What are the pros and cons of living in the capital city?
학생이 쓴 원문
if I live in the capital city, I can watch my favorite performance anytime. and there are many delicious restaurants. but the capital city is too many noisy and dusty.
강사 첨삭
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What are the pros and cons of living in the capital city?
if I live in the capital city, I can watch my favorite performance anytime. and there are many delicious restaurants. but the capital city is too many noisy and dusty.
>> If I live in the capital city, I can watch my favorite performances anytime. and there are many restaurants with delicious food, but the capital city is too noisy and dusty.
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