what are the pros and cons of uniforms for school kids ?
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The issue of school uniforms should go back decades in Korea.
All Korean students of middle and high school had weared military style uniforms from 1930s, Japsnese colonial times to 1980s when the new government liberalized student\\\'s clothes in the school in the reason that the school uniforms remind japanese colonlal era and hinder students from improving their creativity.
And then a decade later, the government made students wear school uniforms again because the free dress made it too difficult to identify students and created a sense of imcompatibility according to students\\\' parents\\\' property.
There are pros and cons of school uniforms in the above article.
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Good afternoon, [이름]!
In my opinion, the advantage is that it\'s a bit harder to judge people on their clothing when everyone is wearing the same thing. The disadvantages is that some people will find their uniform uncomfortable in the weather hot and cold. Some people don\'t like some of the things that they\'re having to wear. What do you think?
- Kristine ^^
The issue of school uniforms should go back decades in Korea.
>> Correct. All Korean students of middle and high school had weared military style uniforms from 1930s,
>> All Korean students in middle and high school had worn military-style uniforms from the 1930s.
Japsnese colonial times to 1980s when the new government liberalized student\'s clothes in the school in the reason that the school uniforms remind japanese colonlal era and hinder students from improving their creativity.
>> Japanese colonial times to the 1980s, when the new government liberalized students\' clothes in the school for the reason that the school uniforms reminded them of the Japanese colonial era and hindered students from improving their creativity.
And then a decade later, the government made students wear school uniforms again because the free dress made it too difficult to identify students and created a sense of imcompatibility according to students\' parents\' property.
And then a decade later, the government made students wear school uniforms again because the free dress made it too difficult to identify students and created a sense of imcompatibility according to students\' parents\' property.
>> Correct.
There are pros and cons of school uniforms in the above article.
There are pros and cons of school uniforms in the above article.
>> These are the pros and cons of school uniforms in the above article.
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