What are the pros and cons of using public transport?
학생이 쓴 원문
Public transport is convenient and fast.
Also It is possible to go anywhere at a low cost.
But, On the way to work, a lot of people are using public transport.
so, many busy and complicate.
강사 첨삭
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Public transport is convenient and fast.
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>>> Also, it is possible to go anywhere at a low cost.
But, On the way to work, a lot of people are using public transport.
>>> But on the way to work, a lot of people use public transport.
>>> But on the way to work, a lot of people use public transport.
so, many busy and complicate.
>>> So it gets busy and inconvenient.
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