What are the pros of socializing with other people?
학생이 쓴 원문
Human can\'t live alone.
That\'s why ancestor of human made a organization to protect from other species such as animal or another human group.
The advantage of socialization is to share group\'s idea or power.
강사 첨삭
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Human can\'t live alone.
>> Humans can\'t live alone.
OR >> People are not meant to live in isolation.
That\'s why ancestor of human made a organization to protect from other species such as animal or another human group.
>> That\'s why our ancestors formed organizations to protect themselves from other species, such as animals or other human groups.
The advantage of socialization is to share group\'s idea or power.
>> The advantage of socialization is the ability to share ideas and power within the group.
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