What are the proven benefits of eating meat?
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Eating meat is great for health, especially for supplementing protein. Students who are maturing should intake balanced amount of meat because it is essential for growth.
Eating meat has double-edged swords. If we intake too much meat, it can be harmful. At the same time, meat is an important source for the body.
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Eating meat is great for health, especially for supplementing protein.
>> OR: Eating meat is great for our health, especially because it\'s a good source of protein.
Students who are maturing should intake balanced amount of meat because it is essential for growth.
>> Growing children should eat the right amount of meat because it is essential for their growth.
Eating meat has double-edged swords.
>> Growing children should eat the right amount of meat because it is essential for their growth.
Eating meat has double-edged swords.
>> Eating meat is a double-edged sword.
If we intake too much meat, it can be harmful.
>> CORRECT
At the same time, meat is an important source for the body.
>> At the same time, meat is an important source of protein needed by our body.
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