What are the questions you ask yourself before inviting someone?
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Hi, [이름]ny!
Oh. That\'s sad. Now, I\'m curious what you did at the host\'s house without any food or drinks.
~ Trixia
Content:
As I said in last class, I am a introvert person.
- As I said in our last class, I am an introverted person.
I can\'t relax at other people\'s house.
- I can\'t relax at other people\'s houses.
When I get an invite, I guess that how long i should stay the house.
- When I get an invitation, I guess how long I should stay at the house.
I think two hour is enough time to spend time with the host.
- I think two hours is enough time to spend time with the host.
I judge why I should accept the invitation.
- I judged why I should accept the invitation.
If I should accept the invitation, I make schedule for coming back home.
- If I accept the invitation, I will make a schedule for coming back home.
That gives me energy to endure visiting time.
- That gives me energy to endure visiting time.
But, the host never serve food, beverage or coffee while I stay the house.
- But the host never serves food, beverages, or coffee while I stay at the house.
I never accept the host invitation again.
- I never accepted the host\'s invitation again.
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