What are the questions you ask yourself before inviting someone?

2024-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Trixia

학생이 쓴 원문

As I said in last class, I am a introvert person. I can\'t relax at other people\'s house. When I get an invite, I guess that how long i should stay the house. I think two hour is enough time to spend time with the host. I judge why I should accept the invitation. If I should accept the invitation, I make schedule for coming back home. That gives me energy to endure visiting time. But, the host never serve food, beverage or coffee while I stay the house. I never accept the host invitation again.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]ny!

Oh. That\'s sad. Now, I\'m curious what you did at the host\'s house without any food or drinks.

~ Trixia


Content:

As I said in last class, I am a introvert person.

- As I said in our last class, I am an introverted person.

I can\'t relax at other people\'s house.

- I can\'t relax at other people\'s houses.

When I get an invite, I guess that how long i should stay the house.

- When I get an invitation, I guess how long I should stay at the house.

I think two hour is enough time to spend time with the host.

- I think two hours is enough time to spend time with the host.

I judge why I should accept the invitation.

- I judged why I should accept the invitation.

If I should accept the invitation, I make schedule for coming back home.

- If I accept the invitation, I will make a schedule for coming back home.

That gives me energy to endure visiting time.

- That gives me energy to endure visiting time.

But, the host never serve food, beverage or coffee while I stay the house.

- But the host never serves food, beverages, or coffee while I stay at the house.

I never accept the host invitation again.

- I never accepted the host\'s invitation again.


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