What are the reasons why kids are afraid of going to the hospital?

2024-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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I think some kids are afraid going to hospital. Beacause the tools are scary. But I\'m not afraid of going hospital, But I\'m afraid of going to the dentest. Beacause the tool are scary. And I\'m not afraid of injection. These reasons are kids and I\'m afraid to going to hospital and dentist.

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~ T. Camille

I think some kids are afraid going to hospital.

>> I think some kids are afraid of going to the hospital.

Beacause the tools are scary.

>> It\'s because the tools are scary.

But I\'m not afraid of going hospital,

But I\'m afraid of going to the dentest.

>> I am not afraid of going to the hospital, but I am afraid of going to the dental clinic.

Beacause the tool are scary.

>> It\'s because the tools are scary.
And I\'m not afraid of injection.

>> But I am not afraid of an injection.

OR >> But I am not afraid of syringes.

These reasons are kids and I\'m afraid to going to hospital and dentist.

>> These are the reasons why kids are afraid of going to hospital and seeing a dentist.

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