What are the reasons why privacy is important?

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Yes. We really have to be always careful with all the personal information that we put

because not all websites are safe. Take care.

~~Teacher May~~

We are living under internet world and we can\'t keep our life without internet.

>> We are living in the internet world and we can\'t keep our life without internet.

The first thing we have to do when we join a website is putting our personal information.

>> The first thing we have to do when we sign up on a website is putting our personal information.

We had to provide ID number, address and telephone number that caused a serious problem if somebody took it for criminals.

>> We have to provide an ID number, address and telephone number which cause a serious problem if somebody took it for crime.

Our government asked website providers to simplify membership requirement.

>> So, our government asked the website providers to simplify the membership requirements.

Then we haven\'t needed to provide our specific personal information to the website.

>> So we don\'t need to provide our specific personal information on the website.

However, there are still a lot of problem while we are using internet. 

>> However, there are still a lot of problems on using the internet. 
 In addition, many people have been suffering from the crime like voice phishing

>>  In addition, many people have been in troubles due to voice phishing.

 I have a experience that someone took all my private information in my smartphone.

>>  I have an experience when someone took all my private information from my smartphone.

He sent a text message contained delivery number with URL, then I clicked it but I couldn\'t find any information about my shipment.

>> He sent a text message that contained a delivery number with URL, then I clicked it but I couldn\'t find any information about my shipment.

I realized that it is a fraud message because he joined security website with my ID and created password by using my personal information.

>> I realized that it was a fraud message because he joined a security website using my ID and created password by using my personal information.