What are the similarities/differences between collectors and hoarders?

2024-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jenna

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Similarity between collectors and hoarders is a buying or selecting somethings. In contrast, difference is that hoarders are buying things just for saving. Collectors are buying things for reasonable reasons. They have own standard what to collect. But in case of hoarders, I think they don\'t have any criteria of buying. Actually I don\'t know exactly what is different between collectors and hoarders. It\'s just my thought.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! I like your take on the difference between collectors and hoarders! Indeed, collectors usually have specific reasons and standards for what they buy, while hoarders tend to just accumulate things without much thought. 
~T. Jenna

Similarity between collectors and hoarders is a buying or selecting somethings. 
>>The similarity between collectors and hoarders is that both buy or select items.
OR
>>The commonality between collectors and hoarders lies in their tendency to acquire or select items.
In contrast, difference is that hoarders are buying things just for saving. 
>>In contrast, the difference is that hoarders buy things just for saving.
OR
>>In contrast, the distinction lies in the fact that hoarders acquire items solely for the sake of saving them.
Collectors are buying things for reasonable reasons. 
Correct, or
>>Collectors purchase items for specific, meaningful reasons.
They have own standard what to collect. 
>>They have their own standards for what to collect.
OR
>>They have their own criteria for curating their collection.
But in case of hoarders, I think they don\'t have any criteria of buying. 
>>But in the case of hoarders, I think they don’t have any criteria for buying.
OR
>>But when it comes to hoarders, I believe they lack any real standards for what they buy.
Actually, I don\'t know exactly what is different between collectors and hoarders. 
>>Actually, I don\'t know exactly what the difference is between collectors and hoarders.
OR
>>Honestly, I’m not quite sure what sets collectors apart from hoarders.
It\'s just my thought.
Correct, or
>>That\'s just my two cents.

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