"What are the situations that make you angry?"

um... rather than it makes me angry, just seeing people who are reluctant to do punctual self-regulation makes me depressed sometimes.It's because when we are still have sound body, i think we have to do many things like hardworking but valuable things such as doing part time jobs, going abroad without much money and studying hard for thier future. Although, we already know these thing are very important to us, we have never been doing anything important like that. I've got a sneak feeling that we waste pretty much time playing computer games or making thier online cafe more attractive otherwise could be used more valuably. Anyhow, i regard self-regulation is one of most important things that the youth must keep in thier mine for themselves. In this regard. everymorning, i started to have a my own time. And i spend the time going to health club and swiming pool for keeping my health. At last, i prepare for my answer before having time with you. Telephone English everynight.

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um... rather than it makes me angry, just seeing people who are reluctant to do punctual self-regulation makes me depressed sometimes.

>>Correct.

It\'s because when we are still have sound body, i think we have to do many things like hardworking but valuable things such as doing part time jobs, going abroad without much money and studying hard for thier future.

>>It\'s because while we still have a sound body, I think we have to be hardworking and do valuable things such as having part time jobs, going abroad without much money, and studying hard for our future.

Although, we already know these thing are very important to us, we have never been doing anything important like that.

>>Although we already know that these things are very important to us, we are not doing them.

I\'ve got a sneak feeling that we waste pretty much time playing computer games or making thier online cafe more attractive otherwise could be used more valuably.

>>I\'ve got a sneaky feeling that we waste pretty much of our time playing computer games or making our online cafe more attractive. Nevertheless, our time could be used more valuably.

Anyhow, i regard self-regulation is one of most important things that the youth must keep in thier mine for themselves.

>>Anyhow, I regard self-regulation as one of the most important things that youth must keep in their minds.

In this regard. everymorning, i started to have a my own time.

>>In this regard, I started to have my own time every morning.

And i spend the time going to health club and swiming pool for keeping my health.

>>I spend my time going to the health club and the swimming pool to keep my body healthy.

At last, i prepare for my answer before having time with you. Telephone English everynight.

>>Lastly, I prepare for my answers before having my telephone English class with you every night.