what are the situations that make you angry?

2016-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Actually, I usually try to forget the situation that makes me angry. But There is one thing that I remember. Recently My grand mother was dignosed with stomach cancer. she just went to hospital for a health check. then doctor told her that you stay in the hospital and should do more exmination. and when I first heard that she need to stay in hospital, I didn't know it. Few days later, My ant told me. I was really sad and cried aloud for an hour. and I was very angry with myself, because my grand mother told me that she was hard to digest. but I just let it go. I shouldn't do it.(Or : I shouldn't have done it/I don't know which sentence is correct.) So this situation makes me angry. and I regret ir until now. And I make myself a promise that I always treat my grand mother with kidness. but sometimes my grand mother did something that she sholdn't do like eat salty food. that time, I couldn't be kind to her.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Kim!

Thank you for sharing your story about your grandmother. I can feel how much you love her. You are right. We should just forget what makes us angry. Just focus on taking care of your grandma. Show her how much you love her.^^

~Kelly^^

Actually, I usually try to forget the situation that makes me angry.

>> Correct.
But There is one thing that I remember.

>> Correct.

Recently My grand mother was dignosed with stomach cancer.

>> Recently, my grand mother was dignosed with stomach cancer.

she just went to hospital for a health check.

>> She just went to a hospital for a health check.  

then doctor told her that you stay in the hospital and should do more exmination.

>> Then the doctor advised her to stay in the hospital to undergo more tests.

and when I first heard that she need to stay in hospital, I didn\'t know it.

>> Did you mean: And I didn\'t know that she must be confined in the hospital.

Few days later, My ant told me. I was really sad and cried aloud for an hour.

>> A few days later, my aunt told me about it, so I was really sad and I cried for an hour.

and I was very angry with myself, because my grand mother told me that she was hard to digest. but I just let it go.

>> And I was angry at myself because my grandmother told me that she was having problems with her digestion but I just ignored her.

I shouldn\'t do it.(Or : I shouldn\'t have done it/I don\'t know which sentence is correct.)

>> I shouldn\'t acted that way.

>> I should have treated her that way.

So this situation makes me angry.

>> Correct.

and I regret ir until now. 

>> And I regret it until now.
And I make myself a promise that I always treat my grand mother with kidness.

>> And I made a promise to myself that I will always treat my grandmother with kindness.

but sometimes my grand mother did something that she sholdn\'t do like eat salty food.

>> But, sometimes my grandmother eats something that is contraindicated to her present condition like eat salty food.

that time, I couldn\'t be kind to her.

>> In that case, I shouldn\'t be kind to her.

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