What are the situations that make you angry?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am angry when someone are lazy in their work. Others are harder because of them.
It is necessary to consider our responsibility in side of other peoples .
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Good job for your homework. Just be careful in using words. It usually alters the meaning of the sentence.
It is necessary to consider our responsibility in side of other peoples .
Until the next one!
See you in class! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila :)
I am angry when someone are lazy in their work.
>>I am angry when people are lazy in their work.
OR>>I get angry when I see someone who is not doing her work.
Others are harder because of them.
>>Others are having a hard time because of them.
It is necessary to consider our responsibility in side of other peoples .
>>It is necessary to consider our responsibility in relation to other people.
OR>>It is necessary to consider our responsibility in consideration of other people.
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