What are the social issues affecting your country today?
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Thanks for sharing your answer [이름]! This is one of the most affecting issues in every country - political issues.
There is no perfect government. I believe that there\'s really something dirty behind these politicians.
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~~Teacher May~~
There are a lot of social issues in our country since the president Moon was elected.
>> There are a lot of social issues in our country since Pesident Moon was elected.
People have felt that we have had hard time because of recession.
>> People have felt that we have had a hard time because of recession.
Government have started their term by draining the swamp (Eradicating a deep-rooted evil).
>> The government started their term by draining the swamp (Eradicating a deep-rooted evil).
Actually, citizens in Korea fed up with corruption of politicians, so we chose the president Moon who was in democratic party.
>> Actually, Korean citizens fed up with corruption of politicians, so we chose President Moon who was in democratic party.
However, current government\'s politicians seem to be only interesting in political retaliation.
>> However, current government\'s politicians seem to be the only interested ones in political retaliation.
Few days ago, the ruling party would like to reform a bill by putting it on fast track.
>> CORRECT
One of the major issues is revising the election law.
>> One of the major issues is revising the law for election.
We have the election system that people can directly choose a member of parliament.
>> We have an election system that people can directly choose a member of parliament.
If the assembly success to reform a bill, the head of party members select a candidate and nominate them.
>> If the assembly succeeded to reform a bill, the head of the party members selects a candidate and nominate them.
All election law have advantages and disadvantages.
>> All policies for election have advantages and disadvantages.
I don\'t know what is the best one for people, but I sincerely want politicians to do their duties without any fighting.
>> CORRECT
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