What are the sports you play?

2023-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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I play baseball, soccer and taekwondo. I play baseball on saturday. And I play soccor on monday. And lastly I play taek wondo on tuesday, wedenesday and friday. I want to play basketball, table tennis too. I\'m playing baseball, soccer and taskwondo, and I want to play basketball and taable tennis. [cheese]

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Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

I play baseball, soccer and taekwondo.

>> I play baseball, soccer, and taekwondo.

I play baseball on saturday.

>> I play baseball on Saturdays.

And I play soccor on monday.

>> On Mondays, I play soccer.
And lastly I play taek wondo on tuesday, wedenesday and friday.

>> Lastly, I play Taekwondo on Tuesdays, Wednesdays, and Fridays.

I want to play basketball, table tennis too.

>> I want to play basketball and table tennis, too.

I\'m playing baseball, soccer and taskwondo, and I want to play basketball and taable tennis.

>> I play baseball, soccer, and taekwondo, and I want to play basketball and table tennis, too.

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