What are the things about you that annoys your mom or your dad?
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I think mostly it\'s cleaning.
I clean my room... But I don\'t know why, But every time I clean, I don\'t see little pieces of paper all the time...
And sometimes I forgot.
So it\'s my cleaning that bugs my parents most I think... :-))
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What are the things about you do that annoys your mom or your dad?
I think mostly it\'s cleaning.
>>> I think it\'s whenever I clean my room.
I clean my room... But I don\'t know why, But every time I clean, I don\'t see little pieces of paper all the time...
>>> Whenever I clean my room, I sometimes leave some papers scattered. Well sometimes I see them.
And sometimes I forgot.
>>> CORRECT
OR: And sometimes I just forgot to pick them.
So it\'s my cleaning that bugs my parents most I think.
>>> So I think it\'s my cleaning habit that bugs my parents the most.
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