What are the things best talked about over a drink?
학생이 쓴 원문
If there is someone who I want to talk to, drink helps me to talk to he or she.
Going to a drinking party is very relaxed and created comfortable atmosphere to talk to each others.
If there is one person who has a wall around he or she, so I can not get close, drinking can help me to talk to them.
Drinking would be one chance that I can get close with others.
강사 첨삭
Great Thursday Ms. [이름] [이름]! Once again, I appreciate your effort of writing your thoughts. Be more expressive and i hope you find enjoyment studying English.
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If there is someone who I want to talk to, drink helps me to talk to he or she.
>>> If there is someone whom I want to talk to, drinking helps me to talk to him or her.
Going to a drinking party is very relaxed and created comfortable atmosphere to talk to each others.
Going to a drinking party is very relaxed and created comfortable atmosphere to talk to each others.
>>> Going to a drinking party is very relaxing and creates a comfortable atmosphere to talk to each other.
If there is one person who has a wall around he or she, so I can not get close, drinking can help me to talk to them.
If there is one person who has a wall around he or she, so I can not get close, drinking can help me to talk to them.
>>> If there is a wall between the relationship of people that is why it\'s hard to get closer, drinking can help me talk with them.
Drinking would be one chance that I can get close with others.
Drinking would be one chance that I can get close with others.
>>> Drinking would be a chance of getting closer with other people.
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