What are the things best talked about over a drink?
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When I drink with my friends, We talked about a lot of things. Example, the sports, politics, history, computer games and girlfriend. There are sports, politics, history and girlfriend in my favorite field.
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When I drink with my friends, We talked about a lot of things. >> When I drink with my friends, we talk about a lot of things.
Example, the sports, politics, history, computer games and girlfriend.
>> For example, sports, politics, history, computer games and girlfriends.
There are sports, politics, history and girlfriend in my favorite field.
>> There are sports, politics, history topics and girlfriends that are my favorite.
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