What are the things/factors that you need to consider when buying a new house or staying in an apart
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I live alone in Seoul from 5 years ago because of studying in the University
So, I found my house three times and I have something to consider when I found my house.
First, I want a clean house because I think cleanliness is very important.
I can\'t live the place that live with cockroach, mold.
Second, convenient transportation is also important factor.
I don\'t have a car. So, I always use bus or subway to go anywhere.
Finally, I like to live near convenient store or supermarket.
I cook my house so, I need fresh groceries. If I live near supermarket, it is easy to buy fresh groceries.
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Hi Se [이름]!
Here are the corrections.
I live alone in Seoul from 5 years ago because of studying in the University So, I found my house three times and I have something to consider when I found my house.
>>I live alone in Seoul for 5 years long because of studying in the University. So, I looked for my house three times and I have something to consider when looking for a place to stay.
First, I want a clean house because I think cleanliness is very important. I can\'t live the place that live with cockroach, mold.
>>First, I want a clean the house because I think cleanliness is very important. I can\'t live in the place that cockroaches and molds are present.
Second, convenient transportation is also important factor. I don\'t have a car. So, I always use bus or subway to go anywhere.
>>Second, convenient transportation is also an important factor. I don\'t have a car. So, I always use bus or subway to go anywhere.
Finally, I like to live near convenient store or supermarket. I cook my house so, I need fresh groceries. If I live near supermarket, it is easy to buy fresh groceries.
>>Finally, I like to live near a convenient store or a supermarket. I cook in my house, so, I need fresh groceries. If I live near the supermarket, it is easy to buy fresh groceries.
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