What are the things that hurt a man's ego?

2016-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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As we all agree undoubtedly, it would be a fatal blow for most of men, to receive negative comments about sex or his thing. Most guys are sensitive and worry about their things. It’s the most repulsive part of a guy’s body. Drawing any amount of attention to the thing for any reason is bound to make a guy a bit self-conscious. If you laugh in the bed, a man will take it badly. The second thing that gets man’s ego bruised a bit is pointing out his poor economic ability. Even if a man downplays it in front of people, he could be seriously hurt. Or at the very least he doesn’t appreciate being mocked for it. Most wives treat their husbands like dirt when a man loses his job or retire, so that he doesn’t support his family financially anymore. It doesn’t matter how long we have worked hard for your family. If you become an old machine that does not work well to produce, you are dead and worthless from your wife’s perspective. What a sad man and miserable life!

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday, Sir [이름]!

I am so happy to receive a composition from you.

It was an informative one. Now, I know why sometimes my cousin told me that I hurt his ego.

I was really confused how I did it. Now, I was able to understand it.

It was about his poor economic ability.

Thanks for teaching me.

I am really blessed to have you.

Teacher Nina


As we all agree undoubtedly, it would be a fatal blow for most of men, to receive negative comments about sex or his thing.

>> correct

Most guys are sensitive and worry about their things.

>> correct

It’s the most repulsive part of a guy’s body.

>> correct

Drawing any amount of attention to the thing for any reason is bound to make a guy a bit self-conscious.

>> correct

If you laugh in the bed, a man will take it badly.

>> correct

The second thing that gets man’s ego bruised a bit is pointing out his poor economic ability.

>> correct

Even if a man downplays it in front of people, he could be seriously hurt.

>> correct

Or at the very least he doesn’t appreciate being mocked for it.

>> correct

Most wives treat their husbands like dirt when a man loses his job or retire, so that he doesn’t support his family financially anymore.

>> correct

It doesn’t matter how long we have worked hard for your family.

>> correct

If you become an old machine that does not work well to produce, you are dead and worthless from your wife’s perspective.

>> correct

What a sad man and miserable life!

>> correct

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