What are the things that make your life worth living??
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That really shows how powerful money is, Jason!
Thank you very much for doing your homework!
Keep in mind that money, although important, is just an instrument, and basically not everything^^
See you!
Honestly to tell the truth, money is the best things that make my life worth.
>>Honestly to tell the truth, money is the best thing that makes my life worthy.
I can buy everything using money.
>>CORRECT!
If I am sick, I can buy medicine or go to hospital to get surgery.
>>CORRECT!
Furthermore, I can eat everything what I want to have.
>>Furthermore, I can eat everything that I want to have.
Moreover, in my opinion, money can be making situations for love as well.
>>Moreover, in my opinion, money can make situations for love as well.
Because if I am poor, even if I love a girl a lot, I will not buy things to make her happy even A cluster of roses.
>>Because if I am poor, even if I love a girl a lot, I cannot buy things to make her happy, even a cluster of roses.
Anyway, I find another thing.
>>Anyway, I found another thing.
Learning something which I have never known or I haven’t ever tried makes me worthy.
>>CORRECT!
When I was young, I was a lazy person to do something especially studying.
>>CORRECT!
That’s why I am eager to study everything especially government issues, science and history because it is helpful for communication with others.
>> That’s why I am eager to study everything especially government issues, Science and History because they are helpful for communication with others.
Anyhow, if I have a lot of money, I don’t need to think about it since I can pay to buy everything such as physicist, interpreter and historian.
>>Anyhow, if I have a lot of money, I don’t need to think about it since I can pay to be everything such as a physicist, interpreter and historian.
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