What are the things that people don\'t usually know about you?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think other people don\'t know about my skills of studying.
My friends tell to me \"you are good at exercise very much\".
But I think they have some prejudice between exercise and study.
They think \'if someone is good at sports, he is bad at study, and if someone is good at study, he is bad at sports.\'.
But it doesn\'t make any sense.
It is just one of the prejudice that many people having.
My mom said I am good at study, and my bestfriend said to me \"You are very good at study\".
But many other people know about my skills of sports, and they have the prejudice
So I think my skills of study is the thing that other people don\'t know.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! There are things about us that others don\'t know. It\'s what makes us unique amongst others. Some of them are good and some are not. Only a few people may know it; most especially the close ones to us. Sometimes it\'s also good to not expose your entire personality to other people for the sake of privacy.
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I think other people don\'t know about my skills of studying.
My friends tell to me \"you are good at exercise very much\".
They think \'if someone is good at sports, he is bad at study, and if someone is good at study, he is bad at sports.\'.
>> They think that if someone is good at sports, he is bad at studying. And if someone is good at studying, he is bad at sports.
But it doesn\'t make any sense.
It is just one of the prejudice that many people having.
My mom said I am good at study, and my bestfriend said to me \"You are very good at study\".
So I think my skills of study is the thing that other people don\'t know.
>> I think other people don\'t know about my studying skills.
My friends tell to me \"you are good at exercise very much\".
>> My friends tells me that I am good in exercising.
But I think they have some prejudice between exercise and study.
>> But I think they have some prejudice between exercising and studying.
They think \'if someone is good at sports, he is bad at study, and if someone is good at study, he is bad at sports.\'.
>> They think that if someone is good at sports, he is bad at studying. And if someone is good at studying, he is bad at sports.
But it doesn\'t make any sense.
>> It doesn\'t make any sense.
It is just one of the prejudice that many people having.
>> It is just one of the prejudices that many people have.
My mom said I am good at study, and my bestfriend said to me \"You are very good at study\".
>> My mom said I am good at studying and my bestfriend agrees too.
But many other people know about my skills of sports, and they have the prejudice
>> Although, many people don\'t know that.
So I think my skills of study is the thing that other people don\'t know.
>> So I think my studying skills is something that others don\'t know about me.
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