What are the things that people have to give up when they have children?

2015-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Did you mean a person became a parent what they have to give up? First of all, I think that She/He have to give up their own time. Instead They take a rest or meet someone, They must spend time with their child. For example, When child was very young the parent should stay and take care the baby all the time. Second, They will lose interest in their job maybe. Because They must feel responsible to raise child. So I'm worrired If I had a children, could I bring up well ㅠ_ㅠ

강사 첨삭

Good morning [이름]! Thanks for answering your homework. Yes, that is what I meant. Anyway, I totally agree with your ideas. ^_^ Don\'t worry about that [이름], you will be. You just have to think that you can do it. Well, we better talk again later. See you! ~T. Jessie~ Did you mean a person became a parent what they have to give up?>> Do you mean a person became a parent, what do they have to give up?First of all, I think that She/He have to give up their own time. >> First of all, I think that she/he has to give up her/his own time. Instead They take a rest or meet someone, They must spend time with their child. >> Instead of taking a rest or meeting someone, they must spend time with their child. For example, When child was very young the parent should stay and take care the baby all the time. >> For example, when a child is very young the parent should stay and take care the baby all the time. Second, They will lose interest in their job maybe. >> Second, they might lose interest in their job. Because They must feel responsible to raise child. >> Because they feel that they are responsible in raising their child.So I\'m worrired If I had a children, could I bring up well ㅠ_ㅠ >> So I\'m worried that if I will have children, can I raise them well?

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