What are the things that people should consider when they travel to a place for the first time?

2023-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

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First of all, you should learn the minimum about the place to go, such as transportation to and from the place, restaurants to top off your visit with a fancy dinner, and a must-go to make unforgettable memories. And, you need to give extra cautious to it if you go out of downtown which has almost everything you need. You can have to carry some gadgets with you, such as a compass, map, umbrella, or some food or water to have. Switching gear, when you go to a place where you have never been to, you also need to consider who you\'re accompanying. For example, if you go on a hike with infants or toddlers, you can take a stroller and check in advance if the path is good for a stroller. Lastly, don\'t forget to check whether there is a chance for security accidents at the place you\'re visiting. It\'s your first time to visit there. So, you can\'t respond to problemas as swift as you\'d do to what you\'re already familiar with. You\'d better ditch any plan to cause any risks while traveling.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Steve! 

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to take note of:

1. First of all, you should learn the minimum about the place to go, such as transportation to and from the place, restaurants to top off your visit with a fancy dinner, and a must-go to make unforgettable memories.
>>First of all, you should learn the minimal details about the place you\'re going to, such as transportation to and from the place, restaurants for a fancy dinner to top off your visit, and must-go attractions to make unforgettable memories.

2. And, you need to give extra cautious to it if you go out of downtown which has almost everything you need. 
>>You need to be extra cautious if you go downtown which has almost everything you need. 

3. You can have to carry some gadgets with you, such as a compass, map, umbrella, or some food or water to have.
>>You can carry some gadgets with you, such as compass, map, and umbrella, and some food or water.

4. Switching gear, when you go to a place where you have never been to, you also need to consider who you\'re accompanying.
>>Switching gear, when you go to a place you have never been to, you also need to consider who you\'re accompanying.

5. For example, if you go on a hike with infants or toddlers, you can take a stroller and check in advance if the path is good for a stroller.
>>CORRECT!

6. Lastly, don\'t forget to check whether there is a chance for security accidents at the place you\'re visiting. 
>>Lastly, don\'t forget to check whether there is security in case of accidents at the place you\'re visiting. 

7. It\'s your first time to visit there. So, you can\'t respond to problems as swift as you\'d do to what you\'re already familiar with. 
>>Since it\'s your first time to visit there, you can\'t respond to problems as swift as you\'d do to what you\'re already familiar with. 

8. You\'d better ditch any plan to cause any risks while traveling.
>>You\'d better ditch any plan that may cause any risks while traveling.

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