What are the things that people used to do before but not anymore?

2021-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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befor is I a little bit obsess over humanrelationship. but I was tired and stressed myself that is was hard. so I didn’t think very deep. now I think to best do to friend stay with me and my family. nowday than before so good.

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Regarding the situation that we have today, which is the pandemic, I think there are a lot of things we used to do before that we can\'t right now. COVID-19 has affected our lifestyles crucially. Everyday things we miss, took for granted and can\'t wait to have back. Whether it\'s going for a cup of coffee, taking a stroll and sparking up conversations with a friendly dog owner or enjoying a meal with friends, even mundane moments of once daily routines feel like a luxury people are already eager to have back.

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befor is I a little bit obsess over humanrelationship. 
>> Before, i was a little bit obsessed over relationships with other people. 

but I was tired and stressed myself that is was hard. 
>> It made me really tired and stressed. It was hard so I don\'t think too much of it. 

so I didn’t think very deep. 
>>  CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE. 

now I think to best do to friend stay with me and my family. 
>> Now I think that it is best to be with my friend and family. 

nowday than before so good.
>> Nowadays are better than before. 

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