What are the things that usually annoy you?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually don\'t get angry. What makes me angry is only when friends and other people don\'t keep their appointments time. For example, I will meet with my friend at 1PM, but he was late for an hour. So I have to ask him, why did you late?. If he doesn\'t have the reason, I might quit the relationship with him.
강사 첨삭
Hi Elic!
That is irritating. Time is very valuable so people should respect that.
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I usually don\'t get angry.
>> CORRECT
What makes me angry is only when friends and other people don\'t keep their appointments time.
>> What makes me angry is when people don\'t show up at the right time during appointments.
For example, I will meet with my friend at 1PM, but he was late for an hour.
>> For example, I will meet with my friend at 1PM, but he will be late for an hour.
So I have to ask him, why did you late?.
>> So I have to ask him, why were you late?.
If he doesn\'t have the reason, I might quit the relationship with him.
>> CORRECT
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