What are the things that usually annoy you? Explain your answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
In my classroom, there are various kinds of students.
I don\'t curse him but in my classroom, there is a student who always messes up the classes.
I feel like he is younger than us, and also he acts and speaks like a child.
Because of that, my classmates hate them and even some of them curse him.
And I am always annoyed by him, but actually I don\'t curse him.
Because I think cursing somebody is really cowardly, and also I don\'t like to curse somebody.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Yes, choose to be kind always. Let\'s hope that your classmate will change already.
In my classroom, there are various kinds of students.
>> CORRECT
I don\'t curse him but in my classroom, there is a student who always messes up the classes.
>> I don\'t curse want to curse him but in my classroom, there is a student who always messes up the classes.
I feel like he is younger than us, and also he acts and speaks like a child.
>> I feel like he is younger than us, and he acts and speaks like a child.
Because of that, my classmates hate them and even some of them curse him.
>> Because of that, my classmates hate him and some curse him.
And I am always annoyed by him, but actually I don\'t curse him.
>> I am always annoyed by him but not to the point that I will curse him,
Because I think cursing somebody is really cowardly, and also I don\'t like to curse somebody.
>> Because I think cursing somebody is a cowardly thing to do and also I don\'t like to curse other people.
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