What are the things that usually make you upset?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I can\'t to be contacted with my daughter where she ls living in Tokyo, I feel upset.
Enen yhough I send messages and kakao talk for several times, I don\'t receive a reply for a few hours.
Such as time, it makes me upset.
I am always worried about my daughter to live alone in abroad.
She is too skinny.(I am fat)
Her major is Fashion design, so she has to solve too many homeworks to make clothes.
As soon as I receive a reply, I feel better.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you again for the homework!
Have a nice day!
Teacher ELLY.
What are the things that usually make you upset?When I can\'t to be contacted with my daughter where she ls living in Tokyo, I feel upset.
>>When I can\'t contact my daughter, who is now living in Tokyo, I get upset.
Enen yhough I send messages and kakao talk for several times, I don\'t receive a reply for a few hours.
>>Even though, I sent her messages via Kakao Talk several times, I still won\'t receive a reply for a few hours.
Enen yhough I send messages and kakao talk for several times, I don\'t receive a reply for a few hours.
>>Even though, I sent her messages via Kakao Talk several times, I still won\'t receive a reply for a few hours.
Such as time, it makes me upset.
>>Such as the lose of time, it also upsets me.
I am always worried about my daughter to live alone in abroad.
I am always worried about my daughter to live alone in abroad.
>>I am always worried about my daughter living alone abroad.
She is too skinny.(I am fat)
>>She is too skinny but I am fat.
Her major is Fashion design, so she has to solve too many homeworks to make clothes.
>>Her major is Fashion design, so she has to create too many clothes as her homework.
As soon as I receive a reply, I feel better.CORRECT!
or>>As soon as I get a response from her, I feel relieved and I get much more relaxed.
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