What are the things that you always bring and must not forget?

2020-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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Definitely, a smartphone is what I have to bring, at first. I can be really relieved as it is in my pocket.  Additionally, an earphone is an essential thing which I should bring out. I used to listen to music on the street or public transportations, but nowadays, I usually listen to BBC radio for learning English even though I hardly understand it. Whatever says, this lets me free from noise.  However, there is one more thing which I shouldn’t miss, though I don’t want to bring. It’s a mask. Since February, we can’t have gone anywhere without it in Korea. Otherwise, we are not allowed to enter any facilities where it is possible to be gathered, except for restaurants. I always wear a mask even on a treadmill. There was some news that some people fought about wearing a mask on a bus or a shopping mall .   Luckily, from today, I can get rid of an umbrella on my daily bring list. For over 3 months, there had been frequent rains which I have never experienced in Korea.

강사 첨삭

Thank you [이름]!
~Lucy

Definitely, a smartphone is what I have to bring, at first. 
>>CORRECT!
I can be really relieved as it is in my pocket.
>>CORRECT!
Additionally, an earphone is an essential thing which I should bring out.
>>CORRECT!
 I used to listen to music on the street or public transportations, but nowadays, I usually listen to BBC radio for learning English even though I hardly understand it. 
>>CORRECT!
Whatever says, this lets me free from noise.
>>Whatever it says, this lets me free from noise.
However, there is one more thing which I shouldn’t miss, though I don’t want to bring. 
>>CORRECT!
It’s a mask. 
>>CORRECT!
Since February, we can’t have gone anywhere without it in Korea. 
>>Since February, we couldn\'t go anywhere without it in Korea. 
Otherwise, we are not allowed to enter any facilities where it is possible to be gathered, except for restaurants. 
>>CORRECT!
I always wear a mask even on a treadmill. 
>>CORRECT!
There was some news that some people fought about wearing a mask on a bus or a shopping mall .
>>CORRECT!
Luckily, from today, I can get rid of an umbrella on my daily bring list. 
>>CORRECT!
For over 3 months, there had been frequent rains which I have never experienced in Korea.
>>CORRECT!

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