What are the things that you are so excited to try?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I would be excited when I tried a base guitar and a drum. Amazingly both of them are musical instruments. Firstly, I\'ve seen a man playing the guitar very fast on YouTube and I thought he seemed super cool and he was so impressive. Second, I always felt like playing the drum looks awesome and I was hoping to try to learn the drum. Someday I would try a base guitar and a drum I hope I would be a even more great boy.
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Happy Tuesday! See you later in our class^^
T. DON
I think I would be excited when I tried a base guitar and a drum.
Amazingly both of them are musical instruments. Firstly, I\'ve seen a man
playing the guitar very fast on YouTube and I thought he seemed super
cool and he was so impressive. Second, I always felt like playing the
drum looks awesome and I was hoping to try to learn the drum. Someday I
would try a base guitar and a drum I hope I would be a even more great
boy.
>> I think I would be excited to play a base guitar and a drum.
Amazingly both of them are musical instruments. Firstly, I\'ve seen a man
playing the guitar very fast on YouTube and I thought he seemed super
cool and he was so impressive. Secondly, I always felt like playing the
drum looks awesome and I was hoping to try to learn the drum. Someday, I
would try to play the base guitar and the drum. I hope I would be a great musician.
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