What are the things that you have learned last year?
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last year, I learned about electric such as power plant engineering and basic knowledge for electric. and I got a certicate for electric engineering. also I studied TOEIC which is English writing and listening test for graduation requirement. but I think Studying English is more harder than electric engineering which is my major. but I should be good at english to get my dream. so I try to study english.
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Hi [이름]! That sounds amazing! At least you learned a lot last year despite all the hardships our world is facing. It\'s okay to face some struggles. Always remember, \"No pain, No gain!\"
last year, I learned about electric such as power plant engineering and basic knowledge for electric.
>>>Last year, I learned about electricity such as power plant engineering and basic knowledge for electricity.
and I got a certicate for electric engineering.
>> I also got a certificate for Electrical Engineer.
also I studied TOEIC which is English writing and listening test for graduation requirement.
>> I also studied TOEIC which is English writing and listening because I have test for our graduation requirement.
but I think Studying English is more harder than electric engineering which is my major.
>> I think Studying English is more harder than studying electric engineering, which is my major.
but I should be good at english to get my dream. so I try to study english.
>>But I should be good at English to get my dream so I try to study this really hard.
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