What are the things that you love to buy?

2021-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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What are the things that you love to buy? I always have many things which want to buy. But I can\'t buy everything I want. Nowadays, the weather is getting, I would like to buy a winter coat. I am searching internal shopping malls until I find the coat I want. If I don\'t get a winter coat, I can save money.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]:)

Yes, the weather there is getting cold already. You need to prepare some winter clothes. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I always have many things which want to buy.

>> I always have a lot of things that I want to buy.

But I can\'t buy everything I want.

>> But I can\'t buy everything that I want.

Nowadays, the weather is getting, I would like to buy a winter coat.

>> Nowadays, the weather is getting colder so I would like to buy a winter coat.

I am searching internal shopping malls until I find the coat I want.

>> I will search in shopping malls until I find the coat I want.

If I don\'t get a winter coat, I can save money.

>> CORRECT

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