What are the things that you love to buy? Explain why.

2021-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I like to buy somethings. Because in this world, there are so many things and I can choose the things that are suitable to me. And I love to choose or design the things that are suitable to me. So I think I love to buy somethings that are suitable to me.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]:)

What specific things do you like anyway? :)

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-Teacher Elise

I like to buy somethings.

>> I like to buy different things.

Because in this world, there are so many things and I can choose the things that are suitable to me.

>> Because in this world, there are so many things and I can choose the ones that are suitable for me.

And I love to choose or design the things that are suitable to me.

>> I love choosing designs that I like.

So I think I love to buy somethings that are suitable to me.

>> So I think I love buying things that are suitable for me.

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