** What are the things that you should do when you are sick?
학생이 쓴 원문
I should go to the hospital when I sick but not when I catch a cold.After, go to hospital and I should eat medicine with a cup of water.When I am very sick, I usually do not go to school and take a rest at my home.I should take a warm and soft food and drink a lot of water.
<Diary>
Title:Home
Home is a good movie.It is funny.Boo bo comes to Earth to live.But O make a mistake.ut O solve a problem and he finds her friends mom who live in Australia.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Thank you again for making your homework and for sharing a bit
of information the movie that you watched which is, HOME.
Home is really a fantastic movie. This movie is full of fun.
I know that you had a good time watching the movie. I hope that you learned
some moral lessons in that movie. :)
I will see you in class [이름]. Take care! ^^
~~T.Kris
I should go to the hospital when I sick but not when I catch a cold.
>> I should go to the hospital when I am terribly sick but not if I have a slight colds.
After, go to hospital and I should eat medicine with a cup of water.
>> In the hopsital, I will drink my medicine with a cup/glass of water.
When I am very sick, I usually do not go to school and take a rest at my home.
>> When I am very sick, I usually do not got to school and rather rest at my house/home.
I should take a warm and soft food and drink a lot of water.
>> I should take in a warm and soft food, and I will drink a lot of clean and purified water. <Diary>Title:HomeHome is a good movie.
>> Correct
It is funny.
>> Correct
Boo bo comes to Earth to live.
>> Boo bo came to Earth to live.
But O make a mistake.ut O solve a problem and he finds her friends mom who live in Australia.
>> But O made a mistake so he did his best to solve the problem. After that, he was able to find his mom\'s friends who were living in Australia.
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