what are the things that you usually do during your free time?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually listen to music or read books in my free time.
I like to walk in thinking, if the weather permits.
Today, I took a walk around lake near by with my dauther.
We drank tea in quiet teahouse on the way and talked about her future.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kate,
Thank you for doing your homework. See you again.
T. Tricia
I usually listen to music or read books in my free time.
>> CORRECT!
I like to walk in thinking, if the weather permits.
>> I like walking while thinking, if the weather is fine.
Today, I took a walk around lake near by with my dauther.
>> Today, I walked around the nearby lake with my daughter.
We drank tea in quiet teahouse on the way and talked about her future.
>> We drank tea a in quiet teahouse along the way and talked about her future.
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