What are the things that you want to have in life? Name at least 3 and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
First, I want to be a program developer because I hoped a program I developed will be used by many people. Second, I want to buy many cars so I will make my own exhibition hall. Third, I want to make a company because I thought in the past that I will be boss.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Jay
There are a lot of things that we ant to achieve and to have in our lives. These motivate us to work and strive harder to achieve our desires.
I hope that you will be able to get what you want in life.
Thank you for giving a response to your homework.
T. Aki~
First, I want to be a program developer because I hoped a program I developed will be used by many people.
>>> First, I want to be a program developer because I hoped to see that the program I developed will be used by many people.
Second, I want to buy many cars so I will make my own exhibition hall.
>>> CORRECT
Third, I want to make a company because I thought in the past that I will be boss.
>>>Third, I want to make a company because I thought in the past that I will become a boss in the future.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.