What are the things that you would/would never do for a friend?
학생이 쓴 원문
If my friend is in need, I will help him. Also, we should celebrate their achievements. But we don\'t ignore our friends. We should respect them. That\'s a way to make great relationship.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] U! Absolutely! You\'ve captured the essence of what makes a great relationship: support, recognition, attention, and respect. These are the four pillars that hold strong friendships together. Thank you for this composition.
~T. Jenna
If my friend is in need, I will help him.
If my friend is in need, I will help him.
Correct, or
>>If my friends need help, I will give them a hand.
>>If my friends need help, I will give them a hand.
Also, we should celebrate their achievements.
>> Also, I should celebrate their achievements with them.
But we don\'t ignore our friends.
>>But, I will not ignore my friends.
We should respect them.
>> I should respect them.
That\'s a way to make great relationship.
>> That\'s one of the ways to make a great relationship.
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