What are the things you are sure you can do for your loved ones?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, I want to say what I can do because I may think it\'s a small thing in other people\'s eyes, but I may not be able to practice what I say grandiosely and it may sound like a bluff. So, I think what I\'m sure I can do for my loved ones is expressing love and saying it every day. There are quite a few people in Korea who are shy and have a hard time saying and expressing love to their precious and loved ones. In addition, I think them even know what your loved ones love. But I think it\'s important to always say that heart and feelings because people don\'t know the minds and feelings well if they don\'t say they love you and express it. It would be nice to have a peaceful day, but I don\'t know that it\'s human destiny, so I\'m sure I can do it for my loved ones to value and express each day because unexpected things can always come.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]! That’s really beautiful and heartfelt! I also believe that consistently expressing love not only strengthens relationships but also reminds people that they are valued, especially in a world where it’s easy to take feelings for granted. Even if it seems simple, these gestures can mean the world to your loved ones and help them feel appreciated and cherished.
-T. Sonny
Well, I want to say what I can do because I may think it\'s a small thing in other people\'s eyes, but I may not be able to practice what I say grandiosely and it may sound like a bluff.
>>Well, I want to say what I can do, because it might seem small in other people’s eyes, and trying to act grandiosely could make it sound like a bluff.
So, I think what I\'m sure I can do for my loved ones is expressing love and saying it every day.
>>But what I’m sure I can do for my loved ones is express my love and say it every day.
There are quite a few people in Korea who are shy and have a hard time saying and expressing love to their precious and loved ones.
>>There are quite a few people in Korea who are shy and have a hard time expressing love to their precious ones.
In addition, I think them even know what your loved ones love.
>>In addition, I think many of them may not even know what their loved ones truly enjoy.
But I think it\'s important to always say that heart and feelings because people don\'t know the minds and feelings well if they don\'t say they love you and express it.
>> But I think it’s important to always show your heart and feelings because people cannot know your mind and feelings well if you don’t express that you love them.
It would be nice to have a peaceful day, but I don\'t know that it\'s human destiny, so I\'m sure I can do it for my loved ones to value and express each day because unexpected things can always come.
>>It would be nice to have peaceful days, but I don’t know if that’s human destiny. Still, I’m sure I can make it a point to value and express my love every day, because unexpected things can always happen.
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