What are the things you need these days?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m addicted by an online shopping, because It makes me pure but guarantees a definite happiness.
Currently, I need a new iPad case.
Because my iPad case is old and additionally, I want to have a case of a new color for spring.
강사 첨삭
Hello Julia! We see each other \"eye to eye\". Thanks for sharing! :)
T. Aki~
I\'m addicted by an online shopping, because It makes me pure but guarantees a definite happiness.
>>> I\'m addicted with online shipping because it satisfies me.
Currently, I need a new iPad case.
Currently, I need a new iPad case.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> I am currently in need od a new iPad case.
Because my iPad case is old and additionally, I want to have a case of a new color for spring.)
Because my iPad case is old and additionally, I want to have a case of a new color for spring.)
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> My iPad case is already old and I want a new case with the color of the Spring.
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