What are the things you need when you go on a trip?
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When I go on a trip I must have bring my cell phone.
It is very basic and necessary thing everyone.
I can check my hotel and tour reservation. And I have to contact with my guide. When I was go to Malaysia.in first day. My phone was exploded while I\'m charging. Because the power didn\'t match. I think the converter was defective. So from the next day. I used my friend phone. I\'m glad I wasn\'t along. We used just one phone during trip. I knew it before, but I realized that cell phone is very essential and indispensable.
Cell phone can be a camera. Nowadays, iPhone and Galaxy have professional camera models.it was not need to another camera.
And it can be wallet. I can pay for my cell phone. Like PAYCO or internet banking services. I think I can travel anywhere with just one cell phone
Oh!. and we need to power band for charged we\'recell phone.
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Hello [이름] [이름]!
There are many things you can bring when traveling. Remember to list what you need to bring so you won\'t forget any of them. :)
~T. Maine
>>When I go on a trip, I must bring my cellphone.
It is very basic and necessary thing everyone.
It is very basic and necessary thing everyone.
>>It is a very basic and necessary thing for everyone.
I can check my hotel and tour reservation.
I can check my hotel and tour reservation.
>>Correct.
And I have to contact with my guide.
>>And I also need to contact my tour guide.
When I was go to Malaysia.in first day. My phone was exploded while I\'m charging.
>>When I went to Malaysia on my first day, my phone exploded while I was charging.
Because the power didn\'t match. I think the converter was defective.
>> It was because the power outlet didn\'t match my phone\'s voltage and I think the converter was defective.
So from the next day. I used my friend phone.
>>So the next day, I used my friend\'s phone.
I\'m glad I wasn\'t along.
>>I\'m glad it wasn\'t that long.
We used just one phone during trip.
>> We used one phone for the whole trip.
I knew it before, but I realized that cell phone is very essential and indispensable.
>>I knew it before, but I realized that the cellphone was very essential and indispensable.
Cell phone can be a camera.
>>I knew it before, but I realized that the cellphone was very essential and indispensable.
Cell phone can be a camera.
>>Cellphones can be used as a camera.
Nowadays, iPhone and Galaxy have professional camera models.
>>Correct.
it was not need to another camera.
>>It was no need to bring another camera.
And it can be wallet.
>>It was no need to bring another camera.
And it can be wallet.
>>It could also be your wallet.
I can pay for my cell phone. Like PAYCO or internet banking services.
>> I can pay anything using my cellphone just like PAYCO or internet banking services.
I think I can travel anywhere with just one cell phone
>>I think I can travel anywhere with just one cellphone.
Oh!. and we need to power band for charged we\'recell phone.
>>I think I can travel anywhere with just one cellphone.
Oh!. and we need to power band for charged we\'recell phone.
>>Oh! In addition, we also need a power bank in case we need to charge our phone while traveling.
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