What are the things you provide for your loved ones?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am always providing many things for my family.
Especially I am providing expensive tuition and cost of living for my first daughter who lives in Tokyo.
Also I provide everythings for life for my second daughter who is a high school student.
Everyday I cook healthy foods for husband.
Of course my family works housework together.
Whenever I go to the grocery store, I always go with with husband.
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What are the things you provide for your loved ones?I am always providing many things for my family.
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or>>I constantly provide a lot of things for my family.
Especially I am providing expensive tuition and cost of living for my first daughter who lives in Tokyo.
Especially I am providing expensive tuition and cost of living for my first daughter who lives in Tokyo.
>>Especially, I have been providing my eldest daughter\'s expensive tuition and cost of living, who now lives in Tokyo.
Also I provide everythings for life for my second daughter who is a high school student.
Also I provide everythings for life for my second daughter who is a high school student.
>>Also, I provide everything for my second daughter, who is a high school student.
Everyday I cook healthy foods for husband.
>>Everyday, I cook healthy meals for my husband.
Of course my family works housework together.>>Of course, my family does all the housework together.
Whenever I go to the grocery store, I always go with with husband.
Whenever I go to the grocery store, I always go with with husband.
>>Whenever I go to the grocery store, I always go with with my husband.
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