What are the things you provide for your loved ones?
학생이 쓴 원문
I give a ring, clothes, shoes, necklace, etc to one that I love. Though I give not expensive something, I have been given a ring and some clothes to my girlfriend. When I earn money, I used to give an expensive necklace. I bought shoes for my parents today in the department store. Because it is Parent\'s Day soon.
강사 첨삭
Wonderful day, Jay!
You are a gem to those people whom you love. ^^
Thank you for the effort to write your homework. appreciate your diligence and commitment.
Keep learning!
Aki~
I give a ring, clothes, shoes, necklace, etc to one that I love.
>>> CORRECT!
Though I give not expensive something, I have been given a ring and some clothes to my girlfriend.
>>> CORRECT!
When I earn money, I used to give an expensive necklace.
>>> CORRECT!
I bought shoes for my parents today in the department store.
>>> CORRECT!
Because it is Parent\'s Day soon.
>>> CORRECT!
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