What are the things you provide for your loved ones?

2024-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jenna

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Well I think I provide very little thing for my loved one so I have to use this chance to reflect on myself. I ask and take care about my family. For example , what did you do today, what did you eat, anything happen, act. But actually I think I was provided a lot to my family members. For friends, I like to write some letters kind of courge message and thankful mind. when I write a letter, I usually use decorate tool like stickers, masking tapes, post cards.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! Thank you for sharing your reflections! It\'s clear that you care deeply for your loved ones and make a strong effort to show it, whether through daily check-ins with your family or thoughtful letters to friends.
~T. Jenna

Well I think I provide very little thing for my loved one so I have to use this chance to reflect on myself.
>>Well, I think I provide very little for my loved ones, so I have to use this chance to reflect on myself.
OR
>>I feel that my contributions to my loved ones are insufficient, so I must seize this opportunity for self-reflection.
I ask and take care about my family. 
Correct, or
>>I regularly check in on and support my family.
For example , what did you do today, what did you eat, anything happen, act. 
>>For example, I ask questions like, \'What did you do today?\', \'What did you eat?\', and \'Did anything happen?
But actually I think I was provided a lot to my family members.
>>But actually, I think I have provided a lot for my family members.
For friends, I like to write some letters kind of courge message and thankful mind. 
>>For my friends, I like to write letters with encouraging messages and expressions of gratitude.
When I write a letter, I usually use decorate tool like stickers, masking tapes, post cards.
>>When I write a letter, I usually use decorative tools like stickers, masking tape, and postcards.

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