What are the things you provide for your loved ones?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Howdy Ms. [이름]? :)
I\'m so delighted of your composition again. :) Having mother\'s love is complicated, it depends on a person who read it. :) Sometimes, they look at the negative side. Thank you for what you\'ve shared :) I might as well learn it on my way.
There is no love as pure, unconditional and strong as a mother\'s love.
sincerely,
Teacher Lucy
It is definitely love.
>>CORRECT!
>>It\'s absolutely love.
Family is supposed to support each other.
>>CORRECT!
>>Family is bind together.
For its achievement, Love is compulsory.
>>CORRECT
Till lately, I thought ,even the family, love is give-and-take.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, I demanded my three guys to do many things for me in the name of love.
>>CORRECT!
>>Thus, I required my three guys to do what I want in the name of love.
Now I know that it was so stupid.
>>CORRECT!
>>I now know it\'s ridiculous.
Love can\'t be give-and-take.
>>CORRECT!
>>Love can\'t be a compromise.
It took 40years to understand it.
>>It took me 40 years to understand it.
I hope this thought will continue until the end of my life~~~
>>CORRECT!
>>I hope this continue until the rest of my life.
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