What are the things you provide for your loved ones?

2019-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

학생이 쓴 원문

It is definitely love. Family is supposed to surport each other. For its achievement, Love is compulsory. Till lately, I thought ,even the family, love is give-and-take. Therefore, I demanded my three guys to do many things for me in the name of love. Now I know that It was so stupid. Love can\'t be give-and-take. It took 40years to understand it. I hope this thought will continue until the end of my life~~~

강사 첨삭

Howdy Ms. [이름]? :)


I\'m so delighted of your composition again. :) Having mother\'s love is complicated, it depends on a person who read it. :) Sometimes, they look at the negative side. Thank you for what you\'ve shared :) I might as well learn it on my way.


There is no love as pure, unconditional and strong as a mother\'s love.


sincerely,

Teacher Lucy


It is definitely love.

>>CORRECT!

>>It\'s absolutely love.


Family is supposed to support each other.

>>CORRECT!

>>Family is bind together.


For its achievement, Love is compulsory.

>>CORRECT


Till lately, I thought ,even the family, love is give-and-take. 

>>CORRECT!


Therefore, I demanded my three guys to do many things for me in the name of love.

>>CORRECT!

>>Thus, I required my three guys to do what I want in the name of love.


Now I know that it was so stupid. 

>>CORRECT!

>>I now know it\'s ridiculous.


Love can\'t be give-and-take.

>>CORRECT!

>>Love can\'t be a compromise.


It took 40years to understand it. 

>>It took me 40 years to understand it. 


I hope this thought will continue until the end of my life~~~

>>CORRECT!

>>I hope this continue until the rest of my life.


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