What are the things you\'re going to do when you retire?
학생이 쓴 원문
I will enjoy my life. For example, I will go to trip to abroad like Japan, France etc. And I will meet my friends every day to talk. Because if I lost my job, I will very boring.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
Retirement is what you make it. If you’re sitting and wondering what to do when retired and bored, it may be a relief to know that there are plenty of options out there and yours is actually a good suggestion. :)
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I will enjoy my life.
>> CORRECT
For example, I will go to trip to abroad like Japan, France etc.
>> For example, I will go on a trip abroad like Japan, France and etc.
And I will meet my friends every day to talk.
>> CORRECT
Because if I lost my job, I will very boring.
>> Because if I lose my job, I will be very bored.
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