What are the things you\'re going to do when you retire?
학생이 쓴 원문
If possible, I want to work for a long time without retirement.
But if I have to retire, I want to travel the world with my husband.
I want to use the English I learned fluently when traveling abroad.
And then, I want to buy a house in Jeju Island and live with my husband.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jennifer:)
Retirement is what you make it. If you’re sitting and wondering what to do when retired and bored, it may be a relief to know that there are plenty of options out there and yours is actually a good suggestion. :)
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If possible, I want to work for a long time without retirement.
>> CORRECT
But if I have to retire, I want to travel the world with my husband.
>> CORRECT
I want to use the English I learned fluently when traveling abroad.
>> I want to use the English that I learned fluently when I travel abroad.
And then, I want to buy a house in Jeju Island and live with my husband.
>> And then, I want to buy a house in Jeju Island and live with my husband there.
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