What are the things you\'re sorry for recently? Write at least two things.

2024-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I was sorry for get angry with my mom. If my mom says \"Do this\" or \"Don\'t do that\", I get angry. I was sorry for when my mom is sad If my mom is sad I\'m sad, too

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Yale!

I\'m sending you back your edited essay. 
Please go through the few and minor corrections, such as adding a comma or period in your sentence.  


Cheers,
Jean~~




               What are the things you\'re sorry for recently? Write at least two things.


I was sorry for get angry with my mom.
>> I was sorry for getting angry with my mom. 

If my mom says \"Do this\" or \"Don\'t do that\", I get angry.
>> If my mom says, \"Do this\" or \"Don\'t do that\", I get angry.

I was sorry for when my mom is sad
>> I was sorry for making my mom sad. 

If my mom is sad I\'m sad, too
>> If my mom is sad I\'m sad, too.
>> OR: I feel sad when my mom is sad. 

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